Monday, October 20, 2014

Tale: The end of story!

Not much to know, not much to say, but i am pretty sure, it wasn't planned to end this way. Wish i could have done something, sad that the time flied, not much to explain, not much to understand, with the bitter taste of love's distrust, i watched their hearts, turn into dust...

The tale disturbed me, confused me, shook me, kind of destroyed me. But the belief is strong, and the faith still exist: "Everything happens for a reason, and the reason is always good."

She was a little girl, who wished she could fly, and he was the little boy, who drew her a cloud. She was a little girl, who loved wind, and he was the little boy, who made her a kite. She was a little girl, who loved water, he was the little boy, who made her a boat. 

He was a little boy, who believed in magic, and she was the only little girl, with fairy dust in her hair. He was a little boy, fighting dragons in the yard, and she was the little girl, watching him fight, dressed as a princess. He was a little boy, who loved compliments, she was the little girl, who wrote him poems. 

She was the little girl, who picked him a flower, and he was the little boy, who caught her a frog. 

Both of them were right from the angle they see the picture, but the only observed problem was: "When you look at me, do you really see me? Or the person you want me to be!"

The stories of broken hearts, never ends, never starts. The silent words, fall from the sky, the tears in eyes, tells all the pain. 

Note: Inspired by fairy tales and some stories around. 

20 comments:

  1. My God. I never knew you could write so well :)

    ReplyDelete
  2. That's very thought-provoking and well-written :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. So it is said life is not all about roses and butterflies, apparently life is filled with circuses, it will test you to your very core. Broken hearts, pain, tears doesn't come with even a small amount of mercy. LOVED IT AMK...

    ReplyDelete
  4. This is beautiful. Write more often! :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. The litte girl and the little boy are made for each other. No matter what happens, they will always find a way back to each other.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Kasam se Shakespeare ki biwi ki call aayi thi, uski qabar mai vibration mehsoos hui hai teri blog ki wajah se. :p

    On a serious note, it's very well-written!

    ReplyDelete
  7. You beautifully knitted each word. So heart touching.
    Amazing!

    ReplyDelete
  8. Brilliaaaaaannnnnnnnnt. Each word can be felt! Amazing!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Wow. Didn't know you could write so well. Good work. Keep blogging.


    Sarah NJ

    ReplyDelete
  10. So beautifully written Arsalan. Heart touching.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Wah kya baat hai! Keep them coming! Isay kehtay hain Zor Ka Jhatka Dheeray say Lagay! :-)

    ReplyDelete
  12. First two paragraphs are just beautiful. So true and they make sense. But love? It doesn't make sense. Not most of the times.

    Those words are full of emotions. Strong heart wrenching emotions. In the end, you don't always get what you wish for. And eventually you end up learning that it was for your own good. :)

    Whoever thinks losing, failing is the end of life is delusional fool. For life is full of surprises, good and bad. You'd soon come to terms with them and when you do, you shall find peace, happiness, satisfaction and above all, you would be living.

    P.s. Keep writing.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Two people don't have to be the exact same to work it out, the differences just make it a tad bit interesting and keep you hooked through; unwinding it together.

    PS. This is one very beautiful piece of writing, great job man.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Well begun!.. the climax was a bit vague but the intro and body are superbly scripted

    ReplyDelete
  15. Love you meri jaan. Likhtay raha karo. Warna kya karo ge ye sab andar rakh k. Suna hai andar paray alfaz ki charas ban jati hai.

    ReplyDelete
  16. yeh hidden talent kyoon chupa kay rakha hua tha baji? You did a pretty good job there. Two thumbs up.

    ReplyDelete
  17. Well composed mate! Great piece! Thumbs Up!

    ReplyDelete